spring cleaning
even the vacuum
is dusty
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Yankees cap
putting on
my old accentOriginally published: https://tupelopress.wordpress.com/3030-project/
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a hard look
at myself
baby picturesOriginally published: https://tupelopress.wordpress.com/3030-project/
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photo album
new wrinkles
on every pageOriginally published: https://tupelopress.wordpress.com/3030-project/
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a highlight reel
of last night’s dreams
afternoon napOriginally published: https://tupelopress.wordpress.com/3030-project/
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heavy fog
the edge of the world
in my back yardWhich version do you think works better? The first has more brevity, always a plus in haiku, but this one may have a slightly better flow to it. This is because the separation between the phrase and the fragment is more clear.
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edge of the world
in my back yard
heavy fogOriginally published: https://tupelopress.wordpress.com/3030-project/
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tall grass
a rabbit leaps
into memoryOriginally published: https://tupelopress.wordpress.com/3030-project/
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Day Three:
get back to you soon
my dead friend’s
voicemailDay Four:
before this road
was paved
memory laneOriginally published: https://tupelopress.wordpress.com/3030-project/
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the raindrops
my wipers don’t reach
funeral processionOriginally published: https://tupelopress.wordpress.com/3030-project/
Edward Cody Huddleston 